My Pitch

 


Pitch 1: A student takes a nap after a long day, now that day is even longer.

Discussion 1:  Groundhog day is when a day repeats continuously, at lest until the character does what the universe it telling them what to do. I want to make a character that goes through trial and error though their day. Basically, make them suffer yet grow stronger form their trials. The concept of this pitch is to show how things can  easily go  wrong  and from that, they could get even worse. While this sounds negative, it will also teach to let things be and accept stuff as they are. This student could use some trial and error to improve on themselves. 

Pitch 2:  Hearing a voice in your head would be a usual cause of concern, but what if you made it your friend, it insist to be.

Discussion 2: So the character obviously has hallucinations, but instead of making them suffer from them, I would do the opposite. Not to glorify hallucinations in any way, but instead of making them seem 'crazy' and 'uncontrollable'  like the media tends to do, I would show hallucination in a more tame light. The voice will suddenly appear randomly, forcing the character to readjust their lifestyle to adapt. It would irritate the character, it would make them lash out, but then they would slowly get closer. Until the character realizes what the voice makes them do isn't normal.

Final decision: Pitch 2 " Hearing a voice in your head would be a usual cause of concern, but what if you made it your friend." because I feel it would be more exciting to carry out.

Comments

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

Production Blog: Editing

Image
^ I promise my editing is not that intricate.   This blog will be pretty straight to the point. I didn't make a lot of significant progress with my editing just yet. Nonetheless, here is what I did so far. First, I of course logged into Capcut to make a new project. Annoyingly, my phone was overloaded in storage, so before I could get further into editing, I had to clear my phone. Either it was me, or the fact that iPhones profit off of extra storage, it was a long process.  I put the scenes in sequential order. I started from the outside shot to the backyard scene. The scenes where it rapidly switched from me speaking to my inner voice were difficult to put in proper order. I kept getting the order confused and overthinking it. After looking back at my storyboard, I decided to go with the flow. After all, I could fix it later. If I woke up late in the middle of the night to realize my mistake, only I would really know. Don't be like me. After putting the shots and scenes wher...
Read more

Why You Should Get Capcut & Why I'm Right

Image
  Hey guys, here's another update on my commercial. Not to sound like a broken record but I realize that Capcut is really my right hand man. So I’m going to rant how great it is. Disclaimer, this blog is not sponsored, but it would be really cool if it was. With CapCut, you can choose from a wide variety of music tracks and sound effects to improve the audio quality of your videos. To discover the ideal soundtrack to go with your video clip, you can select from a variety of genres and moods. A great feature in case you change your mind on your video’s tune. The capability of CapCut to add transitions between clips is another noteworthy feature. Your videos' visual attractiveness and professionalism can be greatly enhanced by seamlessly transitioning from one scene to the next, and CapCut provides a variety of transition choices to help you do this. You can easily get rid of awkward transitions with a blur, or spin on the next scene. With only a few clicks, animated stickers and...
Read more

Title Research: Red Lights

Image
What are the titles in the opening sequence? Starring Character(s) Film Company Title of Film Cast Casting- C.S.A Sound Design Production Designer Edited By Music By Director of Photography Executive Producer Produced By Written and Directed By What images are prioritized in the opening sequence? Hands reach out and touch the screen in a monochromatic color pallete. We see a glimpse of a tunnel, a violen being mishandled. X-ray shots, photogrpahs, text and equation that hint at a mystery or give clues to the plot.The camera cuts to a plane with redlights flashing, a clear reference of the title. How does the opening sequence capture the mood of a thriller? Immeditaly, a tense climax is played and is quickly silenced, scaring the viewers, it constantly flunctates this point as the opening sequence continues. The titles, flicker in  and out, not standstill across the screen as the images behind it move and flicker, with the camera. The letters follow suit, some being vasilty dispropo...
Read more